Feedback/Revisions

There are a few major things that need to be changed in my project. First, I must change the format of my cover page and take out a picture that I put in there thinking it would look good however it does not. Second, I need to add more to my table of contents to fill in white space and to make it look better. Also I feel as if I should change the colors of my text. I will be editing all of this for my final project.

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